Wednesday, April 25, 2012

Haikus WOOHOO

Ode to Haikus

Pannick overwhelms me
poetry is my nemesis
curse haikus

This Wretched Lab

Computers humming
I gaze out the window
graduation hurry up

Hot Mess

Foolish teenage drama
hanging out by the pool;
the heats gets to us all

1 comment:

  1. I really like your last two haikus. They're both extremely easy to understand but have a twist at the end of each of them. I especially like the second one because I think almost everyone in this lab can agree that graduation NEEDS to come faster. The last haiku, I am able to clearly picture an image in my head: boys and girls flirting by , and jealousy hangs around each of them. Good job Sawa.

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